miércoles, 27 de septiembre de 2017
Introduce my self
Hello my name is Angely Fernanda Garcia Cala I am 12 years old I am study in school ''BILINGUE DIVINO NIÑO'' my favorite color is blue , my favorite animal is the dog because they are very loving and beautiful also I love the chocolate because is very delicious, I live with my parents and my twins brothers I like to play volleyball and I am in a school of volleyball also I like play with my brothers and my dad football because they play really good and I like play with my cousins and my friends this is all about me 😊.
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Hello, Angely. Very good job but be careful with the use of punctuation marks. You write too many things together and don't use commas or full stops.
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Hello. My name is Angely Fernanda Garcia Cala. I am 12 years old. I study at ''DIVINO NIÑO'' school.
In this line: "because is very delicious, I live with my parents" after delicious you don't need a comma. You need a full stop because with the full stop we begin a new sentence.
Practice that a little bit more^^
thanks teacher for your recommendation
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